Jolly Good Work TristanR!
I like your choice of representing the gun with the shield folded: so intriguing, I remember I fell in love with this configuration when i first saw that picture of U 889 surrendering with the (double barreled) 3.7 cm rigged for diving. Two pros about this configuration: a) the main structure of the gun is more visible and understandable; b) it's seldom seen, most of the modellers prefer the shields unfolded.
Congrats for the outstanding skills in soldering, if this is your first time trying this technique then double congratulations!
Tip: to avoid de-soldering the previously-soldered joints you might try to cover them with some wet tissue acting as a heat adsorber. Siara once suggested me this technique and it seems to work fine
Keep up the great work!